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John Martin's avatar

This is the sort of poem that will leave a mark.

Conny Borgelioen's avatar

Thanks John. That's very kind of you to say.

John Martin's avatar

It's a very good poem. Kindness doesn't come into it. It says something important that hasn't been says before, and says it in a very convincing way. And in a way commensurate with what it says.

Robert J. W.'s avatar

Love this

Conny Borgelioen's avatar

Thanks so much, Robert!

Sun Hesper Jansen's avatar

First, I love the new, earthier color scheme; it's easy on my eyes too, which I can't say for most websites! I love the way your meditation on the question flows into the way of water because that's often how I feel I've needed to adjust my own way of living since leaving the workforce and not seeing any immediate social contribution. Pressing for the answer of how I will matter today (or any day) or to whom is a recipe for despair, but sort of following gravity and seeing where the currents lead tends to result in serendipitous meaning.

Conny Borgelioen's avatar

You've pinpointed the place this poem came from :)

The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

Stunning. I love this.

On the edge of seventy, who I am and what I mean to others (sometimes, it seems, very little), I'm left to ponder the eternal question: what's it all for? Why are we here? What's it all about?

And, so, I've decided I must live for today, for me and for those nearest and dearest to my heart. Beyond that, really, I have no say.

Conny Borgelioen's avatar

Wise words, Julie! Thanks for your thoughts.

Jennifer Patino's avatar

Oh, Conny, this is a brilliant poem.

Conny Borgelioen's avatar

Thanks Jennifer x

Manuela Thames's avatar

I second what John Martin said. I like this poem! It's truly a questions everyone is wondering about and trying to figure out what it means.

Conny Borgelioen's avatar

Thank you, Manuela! It's so interesting how this question changes when you take a micro or macro viewpoint.